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Not Blue but Red

Post  Soul~of~Crows on Thu Jul 05, 2012 12:42 am

*Im not sure if I am going to include this in thr rpg but I am in the creepy horror mood and this is the priduct. Have fun...cuz I have this messed up idea...about a story....of a girl...named Siru Namonia Twisted Evil *

The cords of her instrument are struck perfectly every time. Perfectly in tune and soothing to the soul. Her blue ponytails hang in peace as her hands work with the instrument to create her lovely music. Her eyes closed as she relaxes to the notes, playing the soft beautiful…memory. Her memory is so soft and blissful and warming to her heart. A memory filled with death, darkness, and madness. Well of course its blissful she thought to herself. It reminds me of the truth, how the world is not what it seems to others. This world….has gone mad. She cackles. Her notes play the perfect melody of madness off tune and off beat strangled and choked out of the instrument. But that is only too last for so long. She can sense a soul that is about to enter the sound wavelength of her music. So she plays the same soft melody as before. Looking totally normal, her hair drooping over her eyes. A soul of a man who had gone out to go shopping for his family. Just to pick up the grocery’s, and had never done anything wrong in his life that would cause anyone severe pain or anger. But once he hears the melody he drops everything he is doing and listens. Everyone seemed to disappear in front of his eyes and the shadows grew black, like paint. He starts to wobble over to the empty warehouse where the music is coming from. A soft and peaceful voice sang..
“My heart is pierced by cupid.
I disdain all glittering gold.
There is nothing that consoles me.
But my jolly sailor bold.”
He is drowning in the music…unaware of his actions.
“My lullaby may be sweet.
And a little bitter too.
But my mother had once told me.
Of your soul anew.
To be born in madness,
No suffering, no more.
It wil be your soul,
That my hand shall hold.”
He realizes he is in a dark warehouse and is snapped out of his trance. The door is locked by an unseen force. He looks at the girl with long dark blue ponytails singing this song over and over again. But her violin starts to change. When she looks intensely at the cords and plays over them….they get covered. Velvet liquid seethes around the once bleach white string and kills the sound. Every time the note and sound disappear a shadow of the note appears on the wall. And the man starts to lose his voice.
Silence.
Everywhere.
A shrill unheard.
A soul missing.
The wood is splattered with red.
His body is covered in red.
Her Music is dripping with red.
Her soul covered in madness.
Her ponytails are not blue but drenched in red.
Beware the song of the Siren Siru.
Her song has drawn many to their drowning deaths in madness and there will be many more.
And her hands are covered in innocent blood.
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Post  Black★Star on Thu Jul 05, 2012 8:32 pm

O.e

creepy........I like it
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Post  Shinigami on Fri Jul 06, 2012 2:19 am

...I'm never going near any warehouses ever again...

It was amazing! I loved the description- it was beautiful!

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Post  Tsubaki on Fri Jul 06, 2012 2:26 am

That was really creepy D: and amazing!!!

Like Chloe said, no warehouses for me either xD

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Post  Soul~of~Crows on Fri Jul 06, 2012 2:27 am

haha im glad you liked it..I thought it was.... ok I couldve done better haha
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Post  Pride Homunculus on Fri Jul 06, 2012 10:20 am

i like it....very instering
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